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Time stops, screaming starts,
The words cut through me the blade is sharp,
My tears form but don't run down,
I know the feeling but can't make the frown,

I can hear you, I know it’s not true,
You can stop the screaming it has no meaning,
I hate you so much I fell from your touch,
Years and years ago…

My heart feels black, no longer there,
My soul is bleeding I can feel it tear,
There’s nothing left you can take from me,
There’s nothing left you can break in me,

Time starts, the screaming stops,
In a flash my life my worlds been torn apart
©2004-2008 ~pnkrockgrl03
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i wrote this becuase of my parrent. (as ussual) but anyways, it was really in my head..... really deep in my head, so even when you read it, you will most likely still not know its true meaning but i hope you like it anyways.
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~lost-tortured-soul:iconlost-tortured-soul: Mar 2, 2004, 11:09:45 AM
Wow... I feel like that sometimes... this is a really good poem. Great job! :thumbsup:

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"Bury it... I won't let you bury it... I won't let you smother it... I won't let you murder it..."-Muse

"That's the end of the Beoulves... Names do not matter. What matters is how you live your life."-Ramza, FFT

"When Angels deserve to die..."-SOAD
~kbspe:iconkbspe: Mar 2, 2004, 12:35:36 PM
Oh my god Sherry! This is so good...I envy your talent for poetry =) I will share my mom with you, she loves you alot! And so do I, if you ever need anything I will be right there for you :hug:
~darkrabbit213:icondarkrabbit213: Mar 2, 2004, 7:47:10 PM
i understand this poem, and i hope you'll realize that you're amazing and you're way too good to have to deal with your stupid parents rambling :) you're fucking awesome sherry, don't let anyone tell you otherwise, and if they do i'll kick their asses. i :love: you!

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Batgirl is my hero.
~xjessickax:iconxjessickax: Mar 12, 2004, 7:41:18 PM
it sounds like lyrics to a song :butterflytwo:



i like it alot!
~pnkrockgrl03:iconpnkrockgrl03: Mar 15, 2004, 10:42:47 AM
because it is, ha ha
~Shady-Lurker:iconShady-Lurker: Sep 21, 2004, 4:19:36 PM
:clap: WOW, just wow, definitly hit me personally thats for sure cuz I know those damned feelings, just plain awesome....the poem, not the stuff you had to go through to come up with it.

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The air is black as can be. Can't even see that my hand is front of me. I'm over hearing a whisper "They wont escape, until the blood is set free."
~pnkrockgrl03:iconpnkrockgrl03: Sep 23, 2004, 8:06:14 AM
thank you so much!!! i'm glad you liked it.. ask me about it and i can explain it

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look beyond what you see,
believe more than whats meant to be free,
the only thing that will be left of reality is the beauty of you and me.